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Here's my honest thought after reading the starting 30 chops. Storyline: It's innovative and honestly i like how it's going so far. i like the authors narrative style as well. it's not peak but not mid either. Just waiting to see how many unfolded mysteries it has to offer. Pacing: Is a bit fast, but that makes it interesting to read. (IMHO) World Building: Probably like any other VR games but the contexts are different than usual. Character: The engagement is a bit draggy. I hope the author will improve further. However Zariel’s character is well written so far. I like her 😂. Updates: Hope to get more. 😄

Keep up the good work, Author. I'll be rootin’ for ya!

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

What can i even say at this point. TBH, the storyline is quite interesting and the character development is good too. there are only a few chapters that lacked moderation. but the others are 🔥

a secret laboratory

calmness before the coming storm

was there something special about them?

it'd be great to see him having one of those... 🥲

iy might be a threat. but there are two commanders. . so i believe it won't be that much of a problem

i have a really bad feeling about it.