Hungry_God_7151

I don't know why you didn't use quotation marks

Rudolf needs glasses

gogo gaga?

the Yuri potential is rising!

isn't this a Korean fanfic? I swear I saw this before.

now I'm starving for more.

its good, but loses its identity after 100 chapters. there is just too many moving parts and it starts to just turn into a mess of "new thing here" without any character growth. if I were to describe it, this story eventually grows into the legendary mechanic.

how righteous so manly horse

a bit too much exposition st the start. if you're having trouble getting into this fic, I recommend just skipping the first chapter or 2.

I actually lime the third homage being strong. if he was weak, it would have been easy for anyone to replace him. Danzo for example needs to be significantly weaker, otherwise he would have killed him for the homage seat