Yilena_Gomez

Great chapter, author. I recommend that the protagonist be more of a warlord, helping Pentos gain more power by creating his Gold Faction and working as a mercenary. I also recommend that his ally be Borros Baratheon, who wants to marry one of his daughters to the protagonist. It would be interesting if all his allies were hidden among the Greens and Blacks, as part of a grand betrayal to put Aegor on the throne, where Aegon and Rhaenyra would have to form an alliance to defeat him. Well, these are just my ideas, author. I hope you read them to improve your great story.

Great, excellent chapter, 1000/100

I also recommend that his allies be House Greyjoy and House Baratheon, but that his dragon threaten another house so that they can support him.

I love your novel, one of the best I've read so far, but the best thing is MC's personality. I recommend that MC be expelled and sent to Essos where he could join a mercenary group to gain combat experience and have that mercenary group help him invade Westeros and take the throne.

I love your story. In my opinion, the MC should strive to become stronger and control combustion, blue fire, and other more powerful techniques. As for the romance, it's not very interesting.

MC

Excellent story! I think it should follow the Daemon and Rhaenyra canon.

Please more chapters

Excellent novel, the best Harry Potter book I've read. Keep it up!