Blackthorn4758

reminds me more of gojo

Can you share the RAW? As a translator itbis important for you to mention it.

RAW???????? Horrible translation but a good plot

Way too fast paced. Nothing good can develop this fast.

Bruh this story is just weird, especially with the romance part. Kushina x Kurama just feels weird and unnatural. Story pace is fast and characters get op randomly.

Definitely ai. To improve the book i wouod suggest removing such paragraphs. Focus on the message you are trying to convey.

I read the opening and it just gets confusing. Like the author has portrayed the greatest wizard of the century as a fool. Like his actions make no sense. The writing is rushed and abrupt.

Never bothered removing cause I don't think Rowling ever covered all of the 28 in detail. We only know the names of a few nothing more.

In fantasy it does make sense. An example would be Happy from Fairy tail if you know what I am talking about.

First of all, hats off to the author for making a wonderful book. Publishing 400 high quality chapters is no joke. When I read this book, I cannot help but realise — the missed opportunity this book was. For all the authors beautiful writing and character developement, the story soon went downhill. Dont get me wrong its still a good read but it is not a great one. As a reader, I lost track of what was going on due to number of added elements into the story. If the story was akin to a dish, It would be overseasoned. I personally found it difficult to keep track of new elements that were added without much background. Throughout the story, the main character has been portrayed as socially awkward. This in my opinion has been used as an excuse to unrealistically showcase this story’s relationships. Except for Daphne, I dont think there is much of a relationship that Harry has withal anybody else. This story is just too dark, too unrealistic. Where is the MC getting his mental strenght and emotional support from. I just feel that the MC is robotic and the amount of new elements like the nordic lore and stuff like that have been added too suddenly and too quickly— without any background.