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uh huh so the red god, after watching Harry dismantle a maze used to contain a god, kill s god, redeem and kill a crying god / two Demi god creatures, defeat and kill something time dragons couldn't stop and then kill the great other who had absorbed the power of a god had killed dozens of gods, taking their power and whilst wielding a literally a shard of death that all the gods on thsi planet where to scared to face is like.... yep ill send my followers after that guy...
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Fleur Delacour would be my preferred love interest for the MC
Ok, so you can write and the premise is fine. but I will not be dropping stones yet, because I hate sob story intros, you've read one, you’ve read them all, I would have much preferred a step into this moment with Charlie with a 1 paragraph summary of the system/how they got there after the door closes... that would have been enough and the set up far more enjoyable.
gGetting seriously repetitive with the whole bringing random ass people along, explaining everything again, saving them, talking alot. and oh? another surprise and/or God/Beast/demon
I mean, when money isnt an issue, he could always buy second home and a second lab back in Texas so In the future he could surprise her with it all/ have a another place to retreat too.