TwistTristan

I do like the story and I like what you're doing, but can't you make it a little bit longer And you don't have to make so much space for them, either, that's all I got to say.

I really do like it. I know many people don't like the slow burn and needle, do I, BUT!!! I have to admit this one done a good job. I enjoy it a lot so Keep up the awesome work.

.................ok you get my Attention

Well, maybe in the future he make a same story, like this one, but then a fire could be liked. I'm just saying.