emirhan

seriously? I don't think so, so I don't know about your first novel.🙏

And yes, I went through the side story quickly, for example, things like 6 years later etc. etc. and anyway, I will finish the first volume in 70-80 chapters and take a break. If it is not popular in the meantime, I will leave my novel.

There's so much in the power system right now so I don't know what to do to slow it down.

Actually, I made something like a side story for up to 13 chapters, and I don't know what to do about slowing down the main story in the remaining chapters. I can add something in between or add some simple plots, but wouldn't it be annoying for the reader?

Hello i am a writer Since my English is not very good and this is my first novel, please forgive my mistakes in my novel. What do you know, maybe in the future my novel will become famous and I will hire a translator, then I can send you the error-free chapters. good reading

nice chapter

Cryus's type/appearance is the same

Cyrus's type

I will explain everything in the following chapters, the power system, world structure, etc.

Translation error, because I translated from translate