Pennedby_Precious

Thanks for the valid point. I'm working on the growth of the characters and moving things along so it's doesn't feel draggy anymore.

Hi Angel. Firstly, thank you for taking the time to write a review. Thanks also for a fair rating of my work despite how you felt. I just want to explain that my book is hinged on a revenge theme. It basically centers on a vengeful FL who swore to take down the family that killed her parents. Naturally, my FL would exhibit hatred towards her unremorseful enemies as will the other MCs (The brothers) who were raised rich, spoilt and got away with their wrongs all the time. She's on a mission to stop the billionaire family from getting away with hurting more people without consequences by exposing their evil deeds. Yes, none of my characters are saints (because humans are generally imperfect creatures), but they eventually get what they deserve and evolve as better versions of themselves over time. It's a gradual process. I have a plot structure I am working with and everything will come full circle soon enough but just not at chapter 120 ish. This is a book that I plan to wrap up at 250 chapters so you see how resolving their conflicts so soon will seem rushed with a lot of unresolved issues given the build up of sub plots. I understand if your patience ran out before you could get there. I probably should have added that the book is a slow burn book and not fast paced. Everything you're anticipating will happen soon enough but I want the progression to seem more natural than rushed. Same applies for the eventual intense romance between the FL and her cherished ML which helps them choose a better way of life, to live with love rather than hate but they can't get there without healing from their pains first and battling their demons. I mean, the FL is literally ignoring her feelings for one of the sons because she believes it's a betrayal to the memory of her late parents and her promise to avenge them. She'll need a major turn of events before opening her heart and not feeling guilty about it. The brothers also need a complete character overhaul to become good humans worthy of true love themselves. They're four btw, with their different lives and POVs so tackling each will take some time. You got me with the R15 tag lol. So sorry. I am still working on my erotica writing skills and on lengthening the scenes. This is my first book so I am still a work in progress. Thanks all the same for the review. I appreciate the criticism. xoxo

Hi Arnaliva. Sorry hun for the long hiatus. I am not dropping the book. I've just been caught up with life. My sister's wedding and a few other activities have kept me from my laptop. My house was swarming with family relatives and guests. I couldn't find a quiet time or corner to plot and write so my daily update routine was shelved till after the wedding. It's all done now and I am starting to get back my rhythm. Daily update of FBB will resume soon. I am also prepping my next book. Sorry for the break. P.S I love ALL my readers alike and genuinely appreciate any interest in my book, paid or not. You all keep me going. Thank you for your encouragement and for sticking with my book this long. Merry Christmas in advance dearie. Love you.

Yet to find a reader who doesn't. He's a favorite of mine too.

Sorry. Typo.

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I am crying real tears and waking up my siblings at night to show them this review. THANK YOU SO MUCH Molly. You made my night! I hope I never disappoint my readers who take the time to read my work and support me. Thank you.🙏

Thanks for the corrections. I'll try to pay more attention when editing.

Hi dear reader. Just wanted to thank you for giving my book a chance 🥰

Hi Arnaliva. I couldn't respond to your latest comment for some reason so I just decided to reply here instead. I did notice and I missed you. Was literally telling my twin sister last night that one of my favorite readers might have dropped my book since I stopped hearing from you. I understand dear. Life happens. I'm in between prepping for my big sister's wedding and struggling to find enough time to write and even meet up with MGS so I get it. Glad to hear from you again. You were missed.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️