Sheila_Stone_9003

This book has just about everything. Humor, suspense, relatable characters, love, hate....well written. Some of the grammar needs correcting, but, I think that's a translation issue. It doesn't cause a problem with reading the story.

It feels like I began reading at the middle of the story. You have powerful imagery in your writing. You need to find a way to pull events together so they are cohesive and make sense

That's twice that she has wiped the blood off her hands.

There is not an explanation as to how she got there. Needs one. Originally sounded like the field was an enchanted place with the Moon Goddess .

I'm enjoying the story, and the different characters versus the normal werewolf romance. It doesn't feel like the writer struggled to make this happen, as so many do. There are some missing words and incorrect words. Possibly lost in translation?

i think it's supposed to be "seven WEEKS early". At seven months early, he would be an inch long with knubs for arms, eyes undeveloped, and a mouth that can't open

i was enjoying the book as originally written. I don't have time to read all day. While there may be some merit to what the publisher is saying, I think it is more from their failure to promote it. They promote the same books in the "rewards" for weeks. Most are not as well written as this one!

Definitely creating some confusion with your story

He only agreed to pay for her because he chose her