Lord_Melkor

Hey, just wanted to let you know that this fic is being uploaded on ao3 under a completely different username. It's called "The Old with Fire and Blood" by Jayu1578. If that's not you, then I would recommend you report that individual and the stolen story to ao3 mod team.

*Chin. Not shin. Shin is the harder frontal area of the leg.

The problem is that cosmic rays are not a blanket term for any and all cosmic related power(s) when it comes to the Ben 10 canon cartoon. It just refers to super hot laser beams. Obviously, I would love if the author munchkin'd and discovered the deeper secrets of cosmic rays to do OP stuff.

If Gwen knows about the Omnitrix, then she should also know of Master Control, that's a very old ability from the OG series. Why is she so surprised?

I really like this. An Overlord fic which isn't centered around Nazarick and Ainz is hard to find, especially one in which the MC isn't thinking of kissing Ainz' robes the first chance he gets- at least I hope this guy doesn't.

Anyways, I hope you figure out how to properly orient this story. Crafting a story is hard, I understand so do take your time. Hope to see the rewrite when you write it.

I'll level with you- I enjoyed reading this story because it was a rare story about a guy in Vilgefortz' body trying to make the best of his life in the Witcherverse. There are so few stories about wizards in the Witcher. He could've stuck to that and kept exploring the mysteries of the world and maybe even found a reliable way to other interesting worlds alongside his allies. DnD worlds like Toril (Forgotten Realms) would be more interesting than what you did. But you decided to send our guy to a cultivation novel, then the classic shounen power creeping started and here we are. You escalated too quick without giving the MC breathing space- we were here to listen to some music that would reach the scales of epicness with time but instead we went from classical music to rock screeches and not even the kind that you can bob your head to.

A year or so older. Depends on the timeskip period.

Why bother nerfing it. You willingly picked an utterly broken CYOA and gave him more than 1 Essence. If you've already made the decision to make him OP- stick to it. Make the best of it and carry on.

Dried out Ghasts are now in an upcoming Minecraft update. You can bring them to the Overworld and then water them to convert them into flying artillery/pets. Transporting more people will be easier.