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ah you're right, Welp then ignore that.

It's generally a pretty interesting fan fic but I find going too ambitious in story ideas a little too quick, I mean the pacing is pretty good but it's getting too ambitious too quickly and BC of that you get some powers having to appear out of seemingly nowhere in order to keep up with the ambition. That said it's still an interesting and good read.

ok sure

adding on you could then make the quest that the system gives go from innocent and seemingly helpful to gojo and slowly become what gojo would think is suspicious and pointless as the quest lead to him in the situation where the new antagonist kills him or something like that

I personally think Isnt a need for a system... but if you had to keep it then you could do it like how the system was done in solo leveling where there it was used to make jinwoo's body a suitable vessel for ashborn to possess so perhaps make it so that the system was there as a tool for a potential/existing antagonist for something like being able to inherit gojo's abilities and gained abilities after killing him as this antagonist could not use the system directly or something like that.

Curse Technique: Null This forces an infinity between any force and any other position, this means that all forces have to travel an entire infinity to change position and thus in this field all forces are nullified, gravity must pull an object over an infinity to pull it to the ground, particles with energy can't vibrate hence no heat, nothing can move apart from anyone that can manipulate infinity (Gojo) and essentially looks like a time freeze to an observer.

this is way too accurate