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Is it just me, or are the reviews strangely suspicious? I mean, look—there’s no rating below 3 stars.
Just use the second type of frequency that directly incapacitates them, like in the comics, and then stab or laser them or something.
no most likely created or ritual or something similar
no they're most likely created or something similar
they're probably friends at this point right ?
Writing Quality: ★★☆☆☆ - The writing is functional but lacks polish, with repetitive excuses for the male protagonist's inexperience. This becomes frustrating, especially when he misses obvious opportunities to use his abilities effectively. For instance, during the battle with the giant snake, he could have easily won by targeting its weakness with heat vision or by lobotomizing it. These missed opportunities make the writing feel sloppy and unconvincing. Story Development: ★★☆☆☆ - The story suffers from inconsistent development, particularly due to the protagonist's poor decision-making in critical moments. The fight with Omni-Man is another example where he could have strategically used heat vision to incapacitate him and prevent the massacre of the Guardians of the Globe. These lapses in logic detract from the overall narrative, making it difficult to stay engaged. Character Design: ★★☆☆☆ - The protagonist's design is flawed, as his inexperience is used as an excuse for failing to make obvious, strategic decisions. This not only weakens his character but also undermines the story. The lack of growth or learning from these mistakes further hampers his development, making him feel static and underwhelming. Updating Stability: ★★★☆☆ - Updates are relatively consistent, but the quality varies. Some chapters are rushed, with the protagonist's strategic failings feeling like plot conveniences rather than genuine character flaws. This inconsistency affects the overall narrative coherence and the reader's investment in the story. World Background: ★★★☆☆ - The world-building is serviceable but lacks depth. While the setting provides enough context for the story to unfold, the failure to integrate important details—like how the protagonist could have used his environment or powers more effectively—prevents the world from feeling fully immersive.
bruh he literally could've blasted omniman just enough time knock him out without killing him he'll he would've just lobotomize him if he ran out of choices
also I'm pretty sure there's a mention where tiamat created humans
I think they most likely created those gods in a conceptual sense rather than a physical one, since fate operates on a platonic concepts.
so physical birth or the standard conceptual stuff in fate?