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I have a question for evry fellow fun of this fanfic is anyone actually reading or is evryone is listening its audio book form like me?

Like I said in my comment from the dialoge that feels similar to that of a very bad comedic theatrical performance. Anyway the ones who's dialoge is almost bad enough for someone to want to instantly drop is Nephis like her dialoge is butting in the conversation without adding anything useful usually repeating what was previously said. You can your dialoge with some good webnovels and see/feel how unnatural it feels even athere shadow fanfics are way better in dialoge they lack in athere things. Also the reason it feels like a joke it is because you have taken some small quirks of the characters and made them their whole personalities this is seen in the song sisters

Honestly the story and the dialog feels like a joke but not in a bad way . Do not expect too much out of this fanfic but I find it enjoyable

Why is he calling the son of Lisa as Joffrey when that isn't his name

For the sake of the plot Tsunade will have learned how to use edo tensei after becoming hokage. Because differently it doesn't makes sense

they aren't supposed to ask for the sleepers flaws and also the sleeper is supposed to have the ability to refuse to answer the questions .Is he answering them due to ignorance ?

Shouldn't sunless know of exactly how to transcend from Ananke or am I miss remembering

You mean Yuno's wind

We are so back you have finally returned let's go

Tyris daughter should be atleast 5 years younger than Morgan