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But you don’t write an ai does it for you and you click post thinking your creative.
Throws a character with 0 control over himself in a world that people constantly get injured just gonna be plot bs for why he isn’t on a murder spree.
Story is trash main character doesn’t do anything he just walks around throwing hints about the story or repeating cannon no original thought in the author’s brain
Why do you make the mc so stupid sometimes why would he not look into his own family history knowing the black madness is a thing
Somehow the author makes the fusion of three of the smartest/evil beings fuses them and makes a crybaby this pissed me off.
Everything the characters say is contradicted by the actions they take story just reads horribly great concept horrible execution.
Gave it a reread still as bad as the first time horrible characters.
Empty monologue galore entire chapters just echoing the same thoughts over and over
What is the point of chapters like rhis when all your going to do is create the same backstory that’s been written 1 million times just get to the point