MarkerofWorlds

Gold monopoly baby!!!

one star because I hate female mc's not all but when it comes to stories like these that are meant for men it's bound to get boring for me in my opinion i don't expect people to agree with me but most people hate female main character especially an overlord fanfic

Its the best i have read so far that everytime i wake up quickly look if it had updated new chapters. so the writing is great it's in grammar i suppose and it's understandable. story developement:it's been great the story is developing quite smoothly there's always a explaination in every scenario so getting confused in the story is very low. character design it good but there's still improvement you the main character could use a better personality template make it more serious and less playful to make it fully adepth for it's role as a mysterious pavalion master. updating stability:it's still ok but there some days that is doesn't update for weeks this could be a problem for new fans it could make them loose interest fast if not fast enough it's ok to take breaks but you have to remember there's people waiting for your work. world background:it's fine it's the same as the original dou qi continent but we don't get much writing about it since it's in a large scale it's hard to write every detail of the place when the character is exploring maybe that's the reason the main character only go to specific places in the original story.

Bahamut

here you go

wait until he taste this

i hope one of his skill will evolve into this

he experienced 300,000,000Million Years of Pure Torture