Andy_Bozz

Very good fanfiction. Recommended. The comedy is very much like the original novel. The story is brilliant. Each person is Very much in character.

In short it was very Messy. All that cheat without effort, simp, everything else. The concept was good though. Just too many Deus ex Machina, little to no character development or growth.

Author should do more world jump. And non main heroin Conquest should be shorten. Try to make omake or side story scenario of what if eiji seiya become... ( Cultivator, ninja, etc or just plain crossing over stealing girl) to whet reader appetite and make the story not stale.

Can someone reupload the previous 800+ chapter to scribblehub or something For new reader. Also add all harem and reward sheet.