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The only problem this fic has is it's updating stability and sometimes there are chapters missing which kind of make the impact of the story kind of low you know. Other than that the story is quite good and the characters are true to their story counterparts, I also like the fact that you keep the canon events but don't waste too much time on them and add your own touch to them which solves a lot of problems I had with the original. Overall the best fanfiction I have read and rest that I have read i couldn't go past a few chapters either because they are to horny like some are pure porn and others are like a kids power fantasy or wet dream seriously. Can anyone please recommend good dxd fanfiction like this where MC doesn't pull everything out of his ass in the very first chapter.

isn't mentioned but we can be sure that he never was an angel because everyone addressed him as Lucifer if not michale or azazel definitely would have called him brother and the chances of him being angel is at most 1% that to if author made a bundler because we know for a fact that when an angel falls they became fallen most probably either they are made from people's faith like many pantheons around the world or god made the himself. because him being angel doesn't make sense but if you're adding him as a original fiction character them it will be possible.

nope he never trained in the dragon realm so converting him with one piece is impossible

crom never trained in the dragon realm after the war between three factions was over he traveled the human world bidding its time and observing different cultures and by the time mc even gets its pieces crom will be considerably stronger than dragon King level because he was already a dragon King level in the three factions war and most probably stronger than tiamat as he was the strongest evil dragon even in that time and I am guessing that cain will turn him into a devil after the devil civil war or during that time it doesn't really matter because he will be around the same level as aphosis was during his fight against issei but still one or two level below ddraig as ddraig was stronger than issei's dxd form during his prime. That's why it will be impossible for him to convert crom into a devil just by using a single piece even if we are talking about the crom just after the war it will still be impossible for him at the very least it will take at least 4 pieces if we are talking about the crom just after the war.

was it stated in the LN or was it something that you originally added. because Lucifer was never an angel in dxd and there is no evidence to support that because when an angel falls they become fallen not devil Lucifer is completely different from fallen Angels. we will get more about devils origin when Vali use his original magic to fight against gods'sof exe.

while we're on the topic why are devil progenitors and ancestors above the super devils . super devils are the pinnacle of the devil currently. devil's progenitors are Lucifer and Lilith and even rizviem was stronger than Lucifer and sirzechs was stronger than Lucifer ten times. Another thing how the hell did cain convert crom into a devil only using one pawn that doesn't make sense the only way that will be possible if he's on the same level as great red or ophis otherwise it's impossible if he is only a few times stronger than him or around the same level it's impossible I also can prove my point remember when Vali reincarnated kuroka into his bishop he needed two bishop pieces not only that Vali was many times stronger than kuroka even then it took 2 pieces it's impossible for cain to convert crom into a devil using only one pawn piece of they are relative in stre strengthen then at the very least he will need 6 pieces or stronger 2 or 3 times then around 4 pieces. If you want to ignore this then that should apply to every other character not only mc. ps:- hey I am sorry if i sound rude but I think these are the few plot holes you need to keep in mind if you want to write another story or something.

If this is the dxd Lucifer so why is he so high on the list along with the likes of heavenly dragons that kind of doesn't make sense.

Is this an original character or Lucifer of dxd because Lucifer of dxd is the progenitor of all demons and their powers.

so this is a original character

isn't the original Lucifer weak in dxd even sirzechs is 10 stronger then him.