Toon_World_4083

very 8ntrestmg system and writingis good you had nick fury treating Alexander Pierce like danzo in Naruto that made me chuckle I hope one day and his novel concludes with a proper ending it good enough that it deserves one thanks 4 upload

only read one and half chapters seems fine exc eptthe im a reincarnation in a fiction world and barely remember shit troupe is frustrating to read when in a fan fiction it almo stdefeats the purpose of fanfiction almost just my off the top feels thought I hope I'm wrong and this good fan fic then great I like the avenger angle for a house talked about but never flushed out of house their were survivors in a medieval wra resetting how could they not be so professional enough to kill all of a house eand leave no survivors cleanly they still use chamber pots it can make sense so thanks anyway for the upload I'll give it try even if I didn't like the i don't like the i don't know almost at nothing anything troupe as a a reincarnated soul it's frustrating as reader a of fanfictions

it's very difficult to read it has no natural flow their alot of read between the lines content their needs to be directed or process for other understand what you trying to convey this novel does not do that it feels as half the novel written and the other half is in the authors mind only then would it make sense iIgave it a try as I typically like walking dead novel even the spinoff but it bot a clean read though too much broken language or half picture to understand what's going good luck to you I guess this isn't for me

heading flows easy the mc is very smart and he . isn't overpowered but he's unique enough to keep him interesting to readersI like it very much thanx 4 upload

rare to read a fanfiction without a system in a apocalypse settings read hope you finish it to completion thanks for uploading

rare to find a game of thrones fanfic started to completion iIhope this novel is different I enjoyed reading it thanks for the upload

I think iIsaw a villain tag and à Hollywood theme fan fiction that's enough for me to read it hope you finish it good effort

thanks for uploading it's really a rare shameless themed fan fiction. hope it gets finished good work gooodluck.the system is oddly fitting to the situation of the family shop like a millionaire 😂

it's very detail and well write it's better off as a original novel than a fanfiction because it barely touches the thing we know and love about the walking dead universe I'm 20+ chapters in but haven't read anything like a fan fiction it's okay to be detailed but the balance between details and content needs work hope you finish this. nice fanfic

I love got fanfiction thanks for uploading Untill compl etei will give stones for every new chapter until it's finished thanks for the upload