Hey ! thanks for the compliment. I am planning to get the whole story down at first, but afterwards, I would gladly like to share my work ^^

May I ask how you manages to post your characters with pictures etc ? I can't find this feature:c

Fantastic chapter!

Mood

Trying my best !

Really addicting

He will ^^

I study drama and screenwriting !

Close enough ! it will be a bit more philosophical and dark, but with some humorous and strong elements. Overall, it will still be a fun power-fantasy journey!

Hey ! Yes, there will be a mage companion later on who is incredibly beautiful and strong ! I don't want to spoiler the MC's future powers yet, but they will involve magic too !

My favorite chapter so far

Author here ! This is my first Novel, so I am kind of trying this out here :) Criticism is gladly appreciated ! The story will later become more sinister while remaining the comedic effect it has in the first chapters. A harem as well as the MC being overpowered are also things, that you guys can expect ^^

same goes for you ! don't listen to negative impact ! :)

I know how hard writing can be, especially if English isn't your first language. You're doing great !

appreciate the honesty ! keep the good work up :D

and ? that's not a bad thing ! actually, it shows even more how committed you are to producing a good story ^^

That's so amazingly written

Amazing first chapter !