Wiz_Werd

I disagree, its weird to use another languages honorifics because it doesnt sound natural and japenese honorifics dont translate well to english speakers. It just doesnt sound right, honrofucs should only be used in the language that they are said in. For example if im speaking in spanish I might adress say “Hola Señor…” as a formal way of address but I wouldt say “Hello Señor…” or “hola Mr….” also most of the stories that do it fetishise japense culture in a way thats uncomfortable to read. At least thats my opinion.

what's the fic name?

Hey dude I just wanna clear some things up. He has the memory of two lives, and the personality of both, as his soul was like mixed. This is explained but I'm not sure if that was clear. There is a flash black (and issues/truamas) from both lives. I'm trying to make it clear that he is not just a dude put into a kid's body, but an adult and kid who where mixed, so yes he has his adult knowledge and maturity but he still has his expierences as a helpless child rooted firmly in his mind. Also there's the fact that his body is still that of a child. Thanks for the review I will try to improve on these aspects.

The American Method

yeah they would make more sense since he's known Julius the longest and Edward is a relative. Hell even charlise would make more sense as a best man since they've spent a lot of time together recently.

his laugh isnt ara ara dude

it doesn’t matter, cops are sworn to protect and serve. Saving a life matter more than the media. It’s very hard to twist a story where the person holding a weapon gets shot. He endangered her life through his actions.

evil can 100% like people. Hitler, Mai Zendog, Dahmer etc bave all had people that they liked or disliked or even loved. Evil is people who hurt others with no regards for others. Evil is people who commmit atrocities because it benefits or amuses them.

just finished mine

Peak