DreamBig2004

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Hey man, I really love the character development and pacing. I'm thinking about writing my own fanfic too. I'm currently researching out the novel I want to write about and the settings. How did you go about doing that and any tips you could share. Keep up the good work!

Is there where he gets infinite void?

Loving it man! You're stuff is coming together so well but is there going to be an adolescence arc before the U.A one?

Dialogue could be better but I love the character design and world-building done so far. It was sick hearing the dad's backstory but that cliffhanger was too cruel man. Keep up the great work!

I like the concept a lot but please proof read your work. Just a once over to make sure you're not repeating stuff like "he's just the background character." Only so many times you can say it in different ways before it gets annoying. I like the concept of the character but the writing really holds it back.

How does some of his spells work if they have not happened yet?

I really like the character and the relationship seems like a plus. Maybe add a function to the grimoire such as an optimizer for his ideas and what not to make him quickly catch up to his peers (or not but hope he levels up fast). Looking forward to more updates!

I like Midoriya and all but please act as a regular human being who understands that the other people are only humans too.

I don't know about the ones without devil fruits, but they arrested them to prevent their devil fruits from respawning. It is also to make them suffer I guess?