DreamBig2004

I don't know about the ones without devil fruits, but they arrested them to prevent their devil fruits from respawning. It is also to make them suffer I guess?

They are going to need a training arc too. They seem a little weak

It's a good story, but the only thing I am confused about is what happened to Ace. Can you talk about the timeline. Did you make Usopp older?

It's good, and I hope you keep it up. However, I don't get why most writers assume that lying to professional liars is a good thing. You have made it known he ain't a genius or one born with that type of talent. Looking forward to more chapters

Easily one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. There is no character development but that's fine as it just blows you away with the plot. Very realistic and just makes sense. 100% recommend to check out!

Where's Theon Greyjoy. I would assume he would be there as that is the timeline and also an integral part. However, great work so far and I am looking forward to more chapters!

Already seems like a great novel 10 chapters in. The only thing I ask for is this novel not to be dropped!! Thank you for this awesome work!

It's a decent story. Can you please put the title of the original or a link to it? The plot seems interesting enough, but it is rather slow. Would love for more updates!

Shameless Author review here. I've been thinking about writing a fan fic for a while now and BTTH is one of my favorite novels. This is my first time writing, and I hope to get better as I go along. I welcome any constructive comments, suggestions for the plot, and ideas for skills and techniques. Thanks for coming here and reading!