Vegas_Baby

just started reading this novel and i just got to chapter 255 and I just have to say it's really great novel when you first start to read it you might think this is just another Smut story but past the Smut part it has a really good story especially when the fight scenes come up they're really great and well thought out this isn't just a Smut story and it has a lot of potential to be something even greater I hope you read this story because you see my review and author thank you for writing such a great story if I were to say there's one problem with the story is sometimes the grammar is messed up it's not bad and it's honestly something you don't notice all the time but sometimes it shows up in chapters so I hope you can fix that thank you for writing the story and have a good day or night

hey author I really like your story but can you please fix your grammar some of the writing in this story is messed up please get a spell checker besides that keep up the good work

just wanted to leave a good review and tell you how much I love your story author keep up the good work and keep writing also I hope your story doesn't end up being one where the MC has to keep taking orders or missions from his system to not get punished I hate that types of stories where the MC is forced to listen to the system so I hope you fix that so the MC's not just a pawn to the system and he has free will to do what he wants besides that have a good day or night

just wanted to say I like your story I hope you keep writing it and don't drop it for anyone who wants to read it it's a good story

thanks for the reply that really sucks I hope it wasn't a copy and if it is a copy I hope I can find it one day

hello author of the story I just wanted to say I like your story but it sucks that we're not getting many updates please update more often and keep up the good work

I just started reading this book and finally caught up it is really good more people should check it out at least give it a try before you judge it so far great story I plan on keeping up with this book I hope other people check it out and like it as well you're doing a great job author keep up the good work

hello author of this novel I don't read this novel I read your other novel Conquering players in another world I was looking for updates today and when I click on the tab it said you got suspended so I was hoping to figure out what happened and wanted to know would you still be continuing the novel that got suspended because I really enjoyed it I hope you bring it back if you can and I hope you respond to my comment I don't want to be rude or bother you I just wanted to know if you would still write it

hey Arthur what happened to the chapters there hasn't been an update in a while now I hope you plan on posting chapters and haven't dropped this story because I really like it I just wanted to know when you upload again so I hope you see my comment and if you come let me know if you're going to post chapters again and if you haven't been uploading because you're sick or something I hope you get better ps have a good night or day wherever you are

I'm loving your story the characters you wrote are great and the writing is great as well keep up the good work that's all I really have to say so if anyone sees this review please read the story and give it your support you won't regret it