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no I think these parts are also important actually I enjoy it more than the fights!!!!

did the author drop this one too? it is really a shame

the story is good but the update stability is a real problem if you get invested in the story with this situation still going then either you will gey frustrated first or completely lose interest. i gave the update stability 1, but if this problem got solved at least this story deserves a rating around the 4.5

what the hell? the strongest warden is female the second is female the fourth is female the seventh is female even jane the previous strongest was female how can the author say that in such a society the females are expected to be caregivers only?

In the first I really loved the story but it just fell off the story progress is mostly good and the pace is same but the problem is that I stopped caring about the characters because they became shallow the harem is just growing in an indiscriminate manner and we are not given enough time to know and develop a connection with them they feel more like a collection of trophies

well this is a very good story I felt that the end was rushed but over all a very solid story with good pacing and a lovely romance after the regression every thing was happening too fast with no room to explore the reactions of the other people but yeah no thing is perfect but the author's writing is magnificent enough to keep me reading through his stories one by one

I am happy that you didn't take my comment as an insult. That takes courage and character. As a kind of artist myself, I know how painful and insulting it feels when you get a low rating for what you believe deserve more! what I am talking about is that the moment siris got killed was supposed to be a bit more emotional he was too chill with her death and more furious about letting travis escape him maybe he was not involved with her emotionally at that level, but she was with him for some time there is also the view of him deceiving himself about thinking about the people as "people" not "characters" in the story he is in, but that would mean he is an unreliable narrator personally, I like the idea of him being an unreliable narrator, but first, can you share your thoughts as the author about that moment?

hello I want to know if this novel is continued on another platform

okay so I liked the earliest chapters, but as the story continues, I see that there are no "serious" moments all the characters are too relaxed in the middle of the fights and the point of the main MC feeling real rage after 150+ chapters and for a one appearance character not for the "perceived" death of one of his love interests makes me feel detached completely the characters of the main cohort are a bit ambiguous, especially jessy. she was a very important character in the beginning as she was calaculting and ambitious, but now she is just a deadpan droping machine with some sarcastic humour while the sarcastic one with a sharp tongue turned into a jealous girlfriend and then turned into the peace maker of the harem overall, the continuous comedic mood even in the serious moments makes me and the ambiguity of the characters made me give this review I hope the author finds this helpful

hello, mister author I have just started reading this book I have some objection about the first parts where the MC is conscious while still in the womb actually, his brain should not even be able to comprehend the sense of self as it is still developing and the soul withour a body should not be conscious as well so I believe it was best to keep him in an unconscious like state or simply trapped in a dark still world with no sense of time or feeling till his birth this is my belief, but if you don't agree with my reasoning and thoughts, I would like to hear about your reasoning and thoughts