TE_MP

The Cynthia Gooshow dialogue seems to be repeated from a previous ch

Zoe -> Zoey

Welcome back

Kamishiro

Kamishiro?

Ok, that was fire

Tabibito -> Traveller ? And I mean throughout the fic.

Elena -> Yelena

*unedited ai not under ai

Hey there long time reader of this series. Been loving the story so far, but the writing quality seems to have dipped a bit in the past few chapters. Please don’t take this as an insult because it is not intended that way, but it feels like you have been using under ai a bit more in these past few chapters. Personally I feel that the ai models currently seem to force extra descriptions onto sentences that done need it. For example: “… with the weight of…” etc. Many sentences that have a “with the” feel way too extra. But that’s just my opinion, keep up the good work