Johan_13

Wonder what is he up to

Is she Alive?

Really well written chapter 1,2,3,4 but it fall a little after chapter 6. I have read till chapter 8. Looks promising enough. Potentially it can be a good story.. The story is different from many fiction of web novel. I liked the development of the character and confusion of Akondo About what he should do next specially when he had sex with thag woman just to be in Freddys character lol 👹

Not a great story, plot simple and normal but there are much room for story development so i will say it can be a great story as the story is developing. there are lacking in depth dialogue and depth writing and overall ok. i will love reading it

Ammm...i dont know what to say, chapter 4 made it wired and dark too. Chapter 5 was not much dark but chapter 4 is like holy cow, i loved it

Its my second time reading it bcs i came from wattpad however now i can see some changes in chapter's its a huge change specially 1&2 changed a lot. Maybe you've improved it.