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the mc has fucking hero syndrome? seriously for a better future for zaun and piltover? hextech is too dangerous? Who is he taken for? I read two or three chapters and I stop it's really boring
ok you convinced me
author by pitier tell me that this time the mc will not look like a sheet that is dragged in all directions. I don't know how to explain it but I'm really irritated by his behavior. Vi and Powder cry so all her anger disappears? returning to their group will only bring him problems but out of nostalgia he will return there? hell, I have friendships that last for years and small arguments are enough to ruin those friendships. Orian has known their group for a few months with a year apart and he has suffered several disasters and there is nothing to gain, being in contact again will only bring him problems! no, a danger of death! It's not Powder who has emotional problems at this point but the mc! as he recounts his life, countless people live in this world without counting the champions of MDR! countless places where it is much more pleasant and protected than Zaun and even Piltover! he's not a child, he's someone who was reincarnated so if he stays in zaun it's certainly not to whine but to enjoy the chaos of the city! study chemical technology! study Hextech! experience its magic! even experiment on living beings since zaun is the city of crime! mess !!
I would have liked to read a more detailed comment before starting this novel so I will save the next readers. the mc is betrayed so all the people who are not these slaves (grant only to women) are people these enemies, ho and for those who wonder that she is his type of woman it is easy to summarize if she is not a virgin she is a slut who does not deserve to be touched or looked at. the dialogues between the characters are boring, I have the impression that they all consider themselves to be blessed children of heaven, protagonists and inheritors of a royal family. holy shit even the R-18 scenes and the behavior of the women is confusing. She is penetrated = she has become a loyal devoted slave. No, but even a virgin is more serene than the author! You can't say you weren't warned!
If I had to describe the story in one word then I would say FANTASTIC!! the chapters are short but there is content and they are published regularly (force to you, my brother). The construction of the world is incredible because it is not just about using the information in arcane but it also took into account the laurel of league of legends so the worlds are more complete and the mc is not content with turn around arcane and wait for the next scene to arrive (well done!). As far as the development of the story is concerned, it takes a different direction than Arcane while being interesting, coherent and concise! (Damn I want to kiss the author) in short, it's an awesome fanfiction
the prologue is way too long! these powers are totally buggy and the author throws in countless amounts of information to make things appear normal. There are also inconsistencies within the relationships of the characters who are not supposed to know each other. The reactions of the characters are not logical with their characters and their profession. Midnight may be a good person but she's not going to cry like a fountain every 5 minutes or boil with anger! we must take into account that she is a heroine and must have seen many more tragic and sad things so she should have had a calm or even cold attitude towards the situation
the story begins well with well-performed character development before the author decides it was time to slip up. without one or two explanations the mc begins to kill the bad guys under the pretext that he wants to train and accumulate experience which is seen enough that he explains that he receives not only the techniques but also the experiences of their use. The Mc trains while the results do not exist! I mean that these powers and these reserves are defined by the gacha so what's the point?? he also has dramatic behavior in scenes that reminds me of sasuke but in victim mode. (no, I'm too weak! I can't protect the little girl who was adopted and who I haven't seen for years! I'm too weak! I can't protect my colleague mei mei who lives perfectly in security and who uses me as a guinea pig! I'm too weak I can't protect Jin who I met a day ago no there are too many criminals in this city when I walk around at night and in places! dark alleys as a little 12 year old boy) In short my opinion is made
He clearly didn't need to kill. the author is just making a drama because the Mc's behavior is that of a degenerate. one day I want to leave Japan and live in peace, another day I will start looking for power, then one day I will have fun tracking down bad guys to kill them. He could have knocked them out and called the police.
This chapter gave me a very impressive feeling. It's as if all my complaints regarding the development of the mc were made without being fully aware of the reality due to the fact that it is not them to adversity. Author I can't wait to discover the rest to find out to what extent he has really evolved in ione