Skordex

Thanks … speech plz

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Merde j’espère qu’il a pas abondonne l’histoire

On fanfiction.net there are only 26 chapters, are you sure of your information?

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terribly boring, the inconsistencies and Chinese clichés can be felt through the translation, the names are Japanese I suppose and do not give a good harmony with the world. The principles of the system are interesting but the values ​​and its functioning are defective in my opinion for a good story that fits with the world of One Piece.

Yesssss !!!

30% or maybe 40% of the fanfiction will talk about external elements such as the comic version or the film version to compare with the world of this one then 30% of the fanfiction is used to justify the actions of the mc or those of others. in short the fanfiction can be summed up to 60 or 70% of boring things. I'm not saying that the writing is bad on the contrary it is good but the reading easily becomes boring especially at the level of the choices of the mc who has no relationship or desires and are never taken to the character who is worth something, while reading I really felt the impression that the story was written by someone who wanted to get readers but who does not dare to establish a story that could potentially displease so I could not immerse myself in it. thank you for trying author

Tu n'as pas à ton excuse ça voudra juste dire que le roman a peu de profondeur se que je suspecte déjà . Sinon il a perdu ?

this is totally empty with less than 5 chapters, 3 chapters of surveys and 91 chapter that asks you to pay his patron . Bla-bla-bla lablla bla bla bla bla