Invader_Chicken

I hate to be that guy neph... but isn't Sunny wearing Weavers mask? Where are the lies?

Yes...Peaceful Dreams is pretty dry. It was first time writing something after all. I know the updated version has been written by Ai to ensure a better overall quality. Still...it's not even close to being one of the best works out there...just very long.

Great chapter! Most importantly, I'm happy with how you skipped parts of the conversation between the 2 slaves since they weren't that interesting. The emotions were very enjoyable.

You could have cut out that entire explanation for what the Nightmare Spell is. Besides that...good chapter.

Nice Chapter👌 I'm looking forward to the next one. Especially if you decide to make it longer than the last ones. I liked Rain in this chapter the most. Her foreshadowing was perfect.

Banger Chapter. Julius is even more desperate than Beastmaster lol.

It was expected. I'm just glad he didn't waste another 15-20 chapters writing how Jet, Effie and Kai/Morgan conquered the citadels.

Very nicely done. The pacing of the chapter felt good. Also, I like how you give more insight into the thoughts of the characters. I see that as an important part myself, so I'm happy when others do the same.

Good chapter, a little short, but I hope you make up for that with more frequent uploads.