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belesa_feminina10 months agoPostedWhat's the point of using The Deep as an MC if you're going to take away his powers and give him another one instead? You could just create an OC
- belesa_femininaa year agoPosted
timeline is wrong. Besides, it doesn't change the story, the MC is always holding back and playing around. That's what happens when you make MC so strong in the beginning
- belesa_femininaa year agoPosted
I didn't like it at all. Too much forced drama. Not for me, but maybe someone will like it. The idea was cool, but the execution was not.... Zzzzz
- belesa_femininaa year agoPosted
System Slave. It may be funny for some people, for me it´s just cringe. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
- belesa_femininaa year agoPosted
I didn't think wanting to be a cuck was true. But it seems like there are people who like it. Author, seek therapy, because this is not normal at all. Or contact me when you have a girlfriend, and I'll make the sacrifice... but seriously just don't be a green hat.
- belesa_feminina2 years agoPosted
Slá. I read the first chapter and it says that the 8-year-old MC already had sennin mode, but it doesn't show how. I didn't like it anymore but I kept reading, at the beginning of 2 the MC awakens the sharingan, out of nowhere, then I dropped it. But the translation is good.
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