Almiron94

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Good start. I hope it does not follow the typical plot of other series.

FEW CHARACTERS FELT LIKE WORTH NOTHING Watching Kael evolve from a frustrated villager to a Titan-powered warrior was a joy. The early chapters might be slow for some, but I appreciate the time spent building up his world and struggles. The relationship with Amna was a nice touch, though I wish it was explored more deeply. The ending of this first part is fantastic, leaving me eager to see what Kael will do next. I’d recommend this to fans of epic fantasy who enjoy a good character arc.

Couldn’t Put it Down, But Some Pacing Issues This story starts with such an incredible hook! The prologue was so intense that I had high hopes for the rest of the book. While Kael is a relatable and passionate character, the pacing felt off at times. Some chapters, especially early on, dragged a bit with too much introspection, slowing the momentum of the action. That said, the concept of the Godslayers and the legacy of Titans is exciting. The battle scenes are breathtaking, and the ending of Chapter 4 left me eager for more. A bit more polish on pacing, and this could be a masterpiece.

In terms of writing or people here call grammatical errors, I dont find any big issues that can disturb my reading experience. It is something that people should expect on webnovel where most of the authors are newbie. For the stability of the updates, I am always notified of a new chapter update everyday. The past few days, five chapters updated daily. That is cool but I hope you will not burden yourself that much. As a reader, I dont mind in waiting everyday for just a chapter since I dont really have that much time in a day to spend here. Thus far, I really like how the story developed. I can see the consistency in the plot and how it progressed. What the MC wants to do and everything is clear and make sense. There are too many characters but the way the characters were introduced make them memorable and there are not the side characters without contributing to the plot. Similar to other reviews, I am still having a bit issue in imagining the setting especially the world. What kind of world Solara is? That is for you to imagine. Anyways, I am looking forward on how this series is going to be on webnovel.

Cool. I really am enjoying this series. Keep it up, Noah.

Thx for the chapter!

So Elementalist is the term for those who can control element? Are there restriction like one elemental power per person?

I really like it so far. Keep it up author!