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SonorousWorks

SonorousWorks

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Just a guy who loves writing and reading

2024-05-22 JoinedSouth Africa
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  • SonorousWorks
    SonorousWorks8 months ago
    Commented

    Like the first comment said , it has nice slow pace but the issue with that is that it tends to become more Western Novel-like instead of it being a "Webnovel". It's good and you'll defintely find your audience but keep in mind that the most popular novels out there are fast paced or are unique.

  • SonorousWorks
    SonorousWorks8 months ago
    Commented

    Great start. Just keep it up. Writing is good too.

  • SonorousWorks
    SonorousWorks8 months ago
    Commented

    Nice. Really good

  • SonorousWorks
    SonorousWorks8 months ago
    Commented

    Paragraph spacing is important to keep the flow of your novel consistent. There are too many sentences in your paragraphs so it's like a huge chunk and really slows down the pacing. Try to break up them into smaller paragraphs. Other than that's it's pretty good .

  • SonorousWorks
    SonorousWorks8 months ago
    Commented

    Now that I've read both chapters. I find the writing lacking maturity. It's awkward but it has potential. It's an original story but has preexisting elements that make it easy to grasp. The writing style needs to improve and I'm sure you'll do well. Just keep practicing and reading.

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  • SonorousWorks
    SonorousWorks8 months ago
    Commented

    Solid start. Although I think it's missing something to capture the reader's attention .

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  • SonorousWorks
    SonorousWorksa year ago
    Replied to C47

    Thank You so much. I appreciate the comment.

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  • SonorousWorks
    SonorousWorksa year ago
    Replied to James_Luca

    Sorry for not responding but thank you for commenting

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  • SonorousWorks
    SonorousWorksa year ago
    Posted

    Heya this is SoronousWorks. Shout Out . Really cool Novel here. Keep it up. I'll be keeping watch.