KijinKojin

Good vocabulary, everything is understandable, the story is interesting and gripping, it makes you want to read more. Everything is well detailed, the characters, the actions, everything is magnificent. Im Lol fan so im hype

Nahhhhh brooooo its a Very good debut The writing is really well done please continue and dont surrend im your first big fan

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This is My favorite Nobel now please bro dont drop

Thats look pretty cool! —————————————

Very great cant wait the next chapters[img=recommend]

I had a little problem

No no !

No !

Bravo using this event for the start of your fanfiction is a good idea. I expect a lot from this story, courage to the author