System_Department

Again in I don’t know if you have selective vision but in CHAPTER 85 he includes every aspect that needs training and even lists potential places where he can train at. I can understand if you said a whole month or even months past without him training but he hasn’t been in the city for a week and is only now getting his bearings. Despite that, he’s about to sign with the Elite Hero Program and get access to best training facilities the city has to offer, he has secured a vehicle and he has established himself in the family. Like I said, I’m not changing the way I write so if you want a guy whose going to focus solely on training after entering a new world then this book isn’t for you.

I now just think you didn’t read properly because again his training schedule includes telekinesis, regen and durability training as well, mentioned clearly in chapter 85. As for the family meeting Elle some day, what makes you think he and Elle just can’t pretend they recently met? You’re making assumptions without looking at the countless variables present in the story.

First of all, he made his schedule in chapter 85 and that’s just training, less than 3 days ago in the story. How’s he supposed to get security for a program he hasn’t signed to yet? It may be 100 chapters in but hasn’t even been a week in the story. This book puts heavy emphasis on showing not telling. If you’re looking for a story with quick progression then this story may not be for you.

In due time...

Like I've told other readers, it's only been a week in the story and the MC is still adjusting. Yes, he hasn't trained his major abilities yet but he's recognized his weaknesses and made a solid training regiment for each aspect. I could've done alot azzpulls or telling instead of showing but I didn't I prefer progressive and immersive writing. I could understand if you said he started hero university and slacked off but he hasn't. All this is new to him and he is making the best of what he can in a few days. As for the system, it's been shown that he has no control over it nor does it appear alot because I don't want to write a story where half the chapter is stats and MC depends on his system.

Bro, it hasn't even been a week in the story. To him these people are still strangers. The more time they spend together the more emotion and bonds are built up. Imagine going to a new world and claiming you care about people you haven't even known for a week.

I appreciate the support and the feedback, it really helps.