EternalRabbit

seriously, another mistake, can you atleast try to write

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then call it cold weapon mastery

why is the word 'still' used here when he previously didn't know that his mommy was making breakfast

I can't understand how webnovel is shamelessly selling this novel to us with so many grammar and verb mistakes

so many mistakes.......but i still like it,wil change the review once i feel like the spellings and grammar is fine

cliche as f

excuses

what i know is that shisui saw his teammates(best friends) die during a post third war mission, but i made this a bit AU in which shisui is already seven or eight yr old and that his bestfriend is actually Usagi who is supposed to die during the war, i also made a mistake with the clone jutsu, i thought it was a tangible jutsu while in reslity the clone jutsu is supposed to just an illusion and not a real body

ahhhh bro you thought all of it out, i will keep this in mind for the future