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Show your magic Baelor "Breakwind"

wouldn't it be *as it joined me like in past tense

that was a book, this is a light novel volume, not the entire book

I kinda hoped this story would explore the effects of the 3rd dragonriding party's intervention in the dance or just existence, but it delves too much onto supernatural. Don't get me wrong, I love magic and mystery, but politics is the best part of asoiaf. Magic plays a huge role in the politics of the world, like dragons and others up north. I like the story, so I sincerely hope you will prioritize politics and Canon Magic over unknown magic, etc

they have no army, fleet is 90% Velaryon. They have crown princess right there, they can't act this brazen, this is not Dragonless Targs we are talking about, these are gods among men type of Targs

This is ridiculous. How can petty lords of small council (none of them are great lords) just decide to take royal heirs as hostages. Rhaenyra is the heir, she can't be treated like some pesky insect. She is a dragonrider besides

you need a beta reader, Ai translations are not always accurate, Daemon is translated to Deyemon

Daemon Velaryon was his grandfather, not father. His father was Corwyn Velaryon. He was born 53 AC

actually, not a terrible idea but blood still matters in westeros even if diluted. I doubt Lords who are dissatisfied with Rhaegal will support their offspring while pyromancer prince/king lives and They should marry their children to unite their claims otherwise it would invite unnecessary trouble for Rhaegals children

fair enough, i forgot the dragon