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Supreme_Void_606

Supreme_Void_606

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2024-05-12 JoinedGlobal
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  • Supreme_Void_606
    Supreme_Void_60612d ago
    Replied to Death_Sounds

    yeah...got tired of waiting

  • Supreme_Void_606
    Supreme_Void_6062 months ago
    Replied to Supreme_Void_606

    perhaps he'll get it when he gets the gem but how long will that be, you seem to want to drag it out as long as possible

  • Supreme_Void_606
    Supreme_Void_6062 months ago
    Posted

    Its good. but I'm not sticking around for 50, 100, 150 chapters of him try to know his talent, its frankly frustrating. goodluck

  • Supreme_Void_606
    Supreme_Void_6062 months ago
    Commented

    wtf is this statement supposed to be? i should be special????? the mc has such a mindset? dropped immediately

  • Supreme_Void_606
    Supreme_Void_6063 months ago
    Replied to Supreme_Void_606

    i cultivate 10,000 times faster primordial awakening limitlessly growth with ex ability primordial awakening i can evolve my skills infinitely my comprehension is the strongest cheat to name but a few. all fell because of this same issue

  • Supreme_Void_606
    Supreme_Void_6063 months ago
    Posted

    i do love me such a story and there are alot i like about it hence the 4.2 rating. everything is 5 star apart from one. story devp which i gave a 1 star review. primarily, this is because he's not working for anything. he hasn't struggled or fought anything at all and hes already able to compete with tier 5 with pure base stats and that limit talent. intents were able to get him to tier 6 when he had 10 times less stats. now those intents have been upgraded to laws. won't he be able to cross all the way to tier 7 or 8 now? mind you, you made those tiers seems so unfathomable and soo unreachable. with this writing and story development of giving powerups like Pokémons won't by tier 2 or 3 out mc be having demigod combat power? and frankly it makes the entire story seem shallow. you keep on emphasising that combat power of tier x at tier 0. it makes characters who have grinded for yrs to get to where they are seem irrelevant. as if you take pride on shitting on their efforts sorry to say. at this pace you mind as well end the story in 200 chapters where he becomes some multiversal being or something. perhaps that's your intention but if not this novel is destined to be a very short one. unless you keep on being descriptive on each and every atom and molecule that changes in his body and as readers i can confidently say well just skip right through without interest whatsoever. there's a novel i read that faced similar issues, the mc became too strong to the point the author just stopped writing it. I'll try to look for it in my library and paste as a comment below. hope this helps if you really want this to be a fully fledged story. kinda like swallowed star. it deals with godkings but i still remember a lot of characters back when he hadn't even reached stellar level to travel out of his little planet.

  • Supreme_Void_606
    Supreme_Void_6063 months ago
    Posted

    it was going well untill he entered that new realm and started fighting overlords, kings, emperors n shit while merely a gene hunter? we dont even know power progressions. he's also been able to pull through every time the says the odds are impossible. plot armor so thick n dense black holes pale in comparison. and the logic of what is going on perhaps makes sense in ur head but to us is nothing but complete nonsense. the chapters aren't edited well, especially the system prompts. sad to see you upload 80+ chapters at once believing that reader feedback is nothing to consider, how arrogant. and finally the language used is so non intuitive to the point one I just skipped the entire fight with the emperor and that new entity that wanted to retrieve something even we don't know its importance. i know you'll delete this but know this n it'll prolly never be seen by anyone other than you but this novel is, sorry to say, complete nonsense.

  • Supreme_Void_606
    Supreme_Void_6063 months ago
    Posted

    I'm quite enjoying the story so far. Its good for a casual and relaxing read. Great job👍

  • Supreme_Void_606
    Supreme_Void_6063 months ago
    Replied to Supreme_Void_606

    aight...lets see

  • Supreme_Void_606
    Supreme_Void_6064 months ago
    Posted

    interesting...lets see where you go with this