nightxxfall

I love this story so much I can’t even explain. In terms of writing it’s great, the grammar can get a little wonky here and there but nothing that ruins the reading experience. And the story development!!! It’s amazing. Everything flows smoothly and gets tied into eachother. There’s also been no character that’s been super annoying or anything like that (well there’s one but ignore that). Character design is great, if a little hard to envision. I think descriptions could be a little better there but they’re still great!! AND THE WORLD BUILDING!!! I love it, it’s actually better than any book I’ve read. Truly an amazing read, I definitely recommend giving it a shot.

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