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Whatever you do just don't drop Scumbag system. I already see you drastically slowed down the upload rate and you've added a lot more to your work load with 2 new novels.

Author, we get it. MC is handsome. We don't need to hear him say it for the 197472919th time. It just needlessly takes away from the story when every other chapter is MC admiring himself every other chapter. As of chapter 53, the story is alright. There is nothing out of the box, but it's a nice comfort read. I say 'comfort read' because you can just turn your brain off and literally not have to think at all when reading this book. There are no critical decisions, no real moments where MC has been in serious trouble, and no real established villainy so far. Also, the girls are too easy. I mean all of them. Perfect harem authors know that they need to have the right mix of girls that are hard/challenging to get and those lovable girls that every reader likes. In this book, every single girl is easy, like there are no trials or tribulations, MC is just gonna add them to his harem. It takes away from the depth of the harem and makes it shallow. Also, dialogue is a bit shallow at times, too. But honestly, I would've given this a way higher rating if MC wasn't boasting about his looks in every other chapter. That shit is annoying to read, and it's a waste of time. Just mention it once, and the readers will understand.

1 Stars for incredibly misleading novel.

Yeah he and Charles were incredibly well written

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