KevinmonsterX

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Diyan tayo sa perhaps na yan eh

Ay! Wala akong masabi as always. Base palang sa Prologue, alam ko nang iiyak na naman ako. Lagi naman! Ket Filipino stories mo, walang happy ending😭

As you should! Hope for more chapters soon, mahal ko.

That's my idea, Adrian please🤣

Your story is an enjoyable read, and I can see its potential for landing a contract. That said, I have a few suggestions that might help refine it further. While the writing is well-crafted, the first five to ten chapters could be even stronger. Editors will focus on these early sections to assess marketability, so tightening them up could increase your chances. Additionally, I noticed in Chapter 2 that there’s a dedicated space for the author's note. You might want to utilize that through Inkstone or the app itself to maintain the story’s flow. Also, consider avoiding “to be continued” at the end, as it's generally unnecessary. Overall, engagement is solid, and with a few tweaks, your work could stand out even more. Good luck! Here from ExoShaneey's recommendations by the way🫶

hi atecco❤️❤️

Here from @exoshaneey's recommendations. I like the first few chapters of this book, it already has a powerful hook. Good job!

A breath of fresh air. A new genre from you nakaka excite!

Fresh and new genre from you attecco