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What is Lynus' talent again? Sounds like Northern needs to send a clone to the rescue
9 paragraphs to be exact from the 4th paragraph to the 11th is copy pasted go artificially inflate this word count
You copy pasted the entire first half of this chapter after Eleanor walked in and said he'd help him. That's bad faith and rude. Please fix the chapter and don't cheat your loyal readers out of a full length chapter with no repetitions or you'll be reported for ripping us off. You're a great author but please don't confuse that with people not noticing tricks.
This is super dark supervillian crap... What did Kevin even do to deserve that? Jack has powers for all of 2 months and he already wants to kill people even though he has access to $7 trillion dollars? Seems to be too cruel and unusual.
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Yes ! Yes! More please!
Otherwise your battle description and writing is flawless and we love your work but the stats being copy pasted and taking up the whole word count feels like you're ripping off your paying readers for chapters shortened by those stats.
Can you do us the readers a huge favor and make an auxiliary chapter and post the up to date stats or maybe shorten the stats section as it gives off the very clear "I'm only putting this here to use up word count" vibe it's not clever and it's offensive to your paying readers to have half a page worth of stats put in their face when it could live in a auxiliary chapter or only state the plot or chapter relevant stats that you're planning on using to further the plot.
Feel like he hasn't bought anything from his store in a long while. Also he can teleport with his lightning god ability along with remove memories of other people? Couldnt he put his father in a coma along with maintain grandfather so that he'd be the only waking man so it'd be easier to jnfluence his harem family and if needed remove the memories of his father and grandfather so that it won't mess up the whole family dynamic?
Does the half the time pregnancy and genetic purification and cultivation side effects follow them to the outside world or only when they go into the harem world manifestation?