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Yeah, i have a problem with style of writing.. if you have decided that your transmigrator is in the medieval times environment... it really makes no sense when you start comparing things with modern day earth... just describe & flesh it out properly so that we can understand. But the whole aspect kills the mood too, i am immersed in Empires, & you bring in Iron man, agent 47... nah c'mon

At one point they are talking, then having sex 🤔🤔🤔

Story is a bit dettached. Like alot ahas been skipped, a cold sister just suddenly becomes insatiable with love for her brother, it don!t make sense.... i hope it improves, otherwise it will be dissapointing to drop.

Smart driver 🫡🔥🔥🔥

Did you guys read properly, 5'8 at 18.... He still has a chance to grow taller, No?

Its great, the charcter has a new flow to it.. and murim with elves and dwarves... thats new....... I am anxious to know will it continue after he gets the frujt or not.