very nice, very nice but i couldn't read any further than the third time beding Was called magic, maybe its a joke i didn't jet, but my heart is already bleeding too much x.x

i kinda love it that Finaly there is this view of like all the people that have, nothing to do (directlky) with the Avatar. its just so funny to think about it that every normal Person just constanly heard about him, but life goes on yk. idk just funny to me

wooow now its get even mire intresting `°`

verry prisice describtion of the fight, thats not easy but you did very well im impressed XoX