tbfog

Plagiarized work. Ripped from Rictus's Path of Ruin. Not cool. https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/path-of-ruin-star-wars-si.541256/#post-36622370

yeah, dropped. Egotistical young mistress with a 72 cm (2 and a half foot) wand. so so stupid.

Horrific grammar. Pronouns are constantly flip between male and female for characters. The sentence structure in places is janky, and in some places the idioms are nonsense. It reads like it was written in another language and fed to an AI translator software with no editor to confirm that the output was correct. Story is great, but it it is simply unreadable.

Falls into the trap of some Reincarnation stories fall into of having the super smart baby cliche when the genius MC is remaking magic as a 1 year old. Please, just let the store flow with some time skips. Give the character some room to breath.

MC is very cringe. Great world building and lore, but the MC is normal one chapter, super evil the next, a redeemed good the next, and then back into super evil. It makes no logic sense from a charter aspect.