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The MC's talent is being misused He have 3 combat talents Sword shield and shoe It should be talent on those areas the MC can only control those said weapons but cannot use technique related with them it means his combat talents have less presence compared to his life talents at the same level
The MC's is just like an emotionless grinding machine He should be made to show some emotions It will make the novel more real
Is the MC a turtle? Why is he only using is shield and not practicing his sword talent ?
It is always funny that martial artist always carry their martial arts books with them every time 😂 in novels why will a normal person carry something so precious around?
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Let me give myself 5 stars review 🤩 The story tell us about the journey of Charlie Pace from Poor to becoming rich and his romantic encounters
Why is it that the MC in all cultivation novels always become Martial artist This is a cultivation novel not martial art Cultivator are supposed to be mage-like Body refining is supposed to support magic not the other way round
The novel is quite good The problem is why after the MC learnt thousands of spells,he still had to run from someone from the late stage of wizard apprentice rank he is 😏