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If you look a little at the details you will notice that you do not adequately specify the times in which the protagonists' actions are carried out. I was very disappointed in the battle with the goblin king, since it was never specified to us when Dravis changed with Draven.

If you don't pay attention to the details I'm showing you then I'm afraid I'll have to stop reading this work. I have noticed that some chapters seem to be written with AI, I'm not saying it's bad, but I would like to read your work, not the AI's work.

Hello Arkalphaze, stop publishing chapters and review the chapters that have errors, you repeat paragraphs, that is extremely annoying, I repeat that the story is good, I hope you correct those errors soon, I want to read the work without problems, I feel that you are not interested giving the interest that this work deserves.

Hello Arkalphaze, the work is good and the plot is excellent, but you are making a serious mistake. You are forgetting to justify the times in which the protagonist makes his movements.

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Chicos, quien se anima a ayudarme a ponerle los puntos y comas a los capítulos, para sacarlos más rápido, es que ando super ocupado.

No he tenido mucho tiempo últimamente

La obra ya va por el capitulo 60, pero los tengo en borrador.

Ya tengo los capítulos, solo falta agregarles unos puntos, y una que otra coma.

Hola chicos, si notan algo raro en el capítulo avísenme, que la App últimamente anda como rara😅😅😅, coloca espacios de forma aleatoria, aunque no se si solo me pasa a mi.