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What do you mean not mine? I wrote this story
Who can you glaze if not yourself?
Yayaya
I did some grammar changes and some edits. Made it more concise
Uh if he was in the anime you would see he had stars in his eyes. I think the stars aren't something that can be seen by the characters though.
Just doing some reworks to it. And uploading it later tonight .
Yeah but I thought it would be more realistic this way instead of the first person he met being iroh
Mirio was nighteyes option. I’m not sure if all might knew about Mirio beforehand . He went to UA to find a successor
Soma is about 25% better than in canon. Their food is still experimental but it’s a lot more refined.
I see I tried to fix that and it will be shown by chapter 13? Hopefully it shows what toshiro’s cooking is all about and differentiates him.