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my English spelling is not very good 😅

i kinda liked it honestly it's Will be fun for once in a while

I see what you did here a little mix for the fight but nice anyways

i feel like this is from a chatGPT translation 🤣🤣

wasn't there a Hunt before bolder show's up

please for future chapter don't use so much dashes only use 2 or 3 it's really annoying for those who listen to the chapters other than reading it

can you please stop using the dots and dashs in the future chapter it is really annoying for people listening to the chapters

i really like the story but some chapters have repeated parts in them i hope Arthur can fix

repeat of the second half

what do you mean he doesn't know about it in chapter 3 it says he read the books and he knows about the world