Quite frankly I just love it. it has the combination of suspense, trauma, excitement, and everything. the character development is fantastic

stupid

and the house they live in is a haunted house

spoilers# that girl in the gown is also his great grand aunt

spoilers for chapter2 he will enter the Haunted woods in the middle of the night with his new friend Mikey at a sleepover

but chapter 2 will definitely

Chapter 1 doesn't really show the main character's mc's identity

I love the suspense

Still writing though soon imma hang with it for a while .... loving the world building soon far, characters are interesting, power system is cool(I mean elements, quite underrated but fun).... basically a 10/10 .... keep it up. .... PS. just fix the errors on each update, cool you're doing daily KEEP WRITING [img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=golden ticket]

keep updating... daily is cool 😎

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Kay.. . errors seem a lot now.... fix them soon

needs some editing tho

another awesome chapter

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Whoa.... Trouble for real...

whoa..... elements are the perfect power system btw

interesting..... NEXT!!!!!

awesome pacing