Lenkaiz

God this is rubbish. The writing is messed up with lots of mistakes. I mean you expect readers to pay and read something that cant be read? Isnt this extortion? I blame the management of Webnovel for not doing anything about this just allowing people to post rubbish as long as they are getting paid. This is B.S

The writing is all over the place. I'm sure as a writer you must have read Cultivation novels with system so why give us this shit??? I mean I tried, i really did tried to hold on but nah it's totally fucked up dude. Please read some of the top Cultivation novels that has system and rewrite this shit

I mean the techniques he has learn are all over the place and I cant even keep up with the ones that no longer appears on the system interface 🤦🏾‍♂️. Instead of packing of so many why no just a movement, sword, body technique while he keeps going with Alchemy & Tailisman creation

I hope this is the last time this so called junior sister will be attached to the MC. I dont fucking care its fucking annoying. I mean she doesnt bring anything or add anything to the plot. This ain't fan service

I think the Author is dumb, I apologize Author but I dont know if you are trying to be unique or whatever. Bruh leaves his Cultivation and dont even knows what sharpness means. I mean why do you guys always want to portray these MC's as dumb? He came from the Morden world for fuck sake

Bruhh next time no more Romance, maybe a few who wants to chase after the MC. I'm tired of all these cringy Romance

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If only the Author had given him a sub_space along with the system

No System or cheats?

Is there a system?