Aaron_Loo_0244

This is -------------------------------------------------- a pretty bad story. I don't know why everything is written like this. --------------------------------------------------

I really like the concept behind story, but the vocabulary that the AI generated is horrible. It keeps on using words likes optics, processing loop, metrics, intake loop, etc. It's like if Terminator wrote this story. Such a waste.

I give up, the vocabulary is just getting worse and worse. What a waste of a good story

Yeah all this intake look and optics talk is lwk unreadable 😭

Yeah the story reads like Terminator wrote it or something

This story is a little slow paced, but the writing, flow, and character design is all super high quality so that it doesn't feel boring. The characters and interactions between them are all fleshed out really well too.

The story is pretty good and I like how fleshed out the world is with all the anime characters tied together. However, the story development can feel a little slow at times. For example, there was a point where the MC went on a date with Shizuka, but the date took 3 chapters. These chapters were super long too. Also, sometimes it feels like the comedy is played up a little too much during fights sometimes. It gets to a point where the whole fight just feels like a comedy routine. A good example of this is the fight to save the quintuplets. The fight felt like the Dondachaka and Peshe fight against Szayelaporro Granz from Bleach.

If you've blocked him, doesn't that mean he won't even see this reply? 😭

Reading this story is just a waste of time. The MC is a doormat that doesn't do anything but simp over the female leads. Also it is incredibly Chinese with the face slapping literally everywhere.

The writing quality really starts to fall off around. Chapters 70 to 80. The MC is built up to be this smart OP character and then just gets randomly nerfed in the middle of the series.