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this review won't be here you dumb imbecile

Naruto died in 3rd war? yea, now i know why people don't understand my pieces. And even if we presume that the talk is about Obito, the guy still did not die at that exact time.

Don't like it? Don't read. Hopefully there's at least some self-respect in the two of you, and after two or three hundred chapters you won't even open this fanfic, saying it's interesting to read now. Stick to your guns and add it to your "never read" list.

I'm waiting for it. Summarize all 40 chapters in two and send them to me. In that case,i'll just deleted my fanfiction. And the way you will do it should be by your "high" standards, the way an author you consider worthy of being called decent would do. How much time you need for that?

Okay, guys, here comes the second fanfiction. Read the GOT one if you have not already and tell me. I need to know which one of these two you guys are more interested in and therefore which one should I continue?

Another point, why there is chakra in environment. Before the events with the chakra fruit, people of that world were without chakra, but then again Kishimoto left way too many illogical points and it's hard to say for sure.

To tell you the truth, this is a very debatable topic. The body's energy should have a direct connection to the outside. If it didn't, then jutsu that drain chakra from others wouldn't be able to exist. Plus, in all the Naruto games, if you do a quick regeneration, there's an effect as if the chakra is all stirred up and creates a connection to the outside world. And another argument is that even in the anime, they repeatedly show shinobi sitting down and starting to regenerate their chakra. If it was only as you say, using the energy within themselves, then each such regeneration should have shortened their lifespan. I adhere to the idea that a person takes physical energy partly from the outside, and already within himself, together with spiritual energy, produces chakra. My description in the chapter itself was about the formation of chakra, not about the origin of energies themselves, provided you were attentive.

There is another way to do so :) glad you enjoy

You know what's insulting? With the amount of detail I've thought out and mentioned in the piece, there's still some fool who calls me an AI.

It's too slow for you, the other likes it, but I believe the former can't notice details.